Feedback from Others

Feedback: 
Sound
- The inception thuds was effective as it made it more creative and adds the tension to the film, some felt like we should of added more sound to the background so that we could create the tension throughout the opening but we felt like in some parts of the film didn't need sound like the conversation between the mum and friend and the train shot as we felt like putting sound in would put the audience off the conversation and focus more on the sound but we want to keep the focus on the conversation and the events that are going on in the opening, but the parts we did put sound in we felt was effected as it created tension.

Mese en scene 
I agree with the comments made on our film and feel like, yes the lighting should of been a bit better but because it was at a time where it got really dark really quickly we had to be as carefully as possible just in case the lighten was to dark. Also some people felt like they would of liked to have seen what had happened with Hannah and that the whole scene should be outside, but we felt like we should of changed location to make it more effective. I also think the antagonists costume was effective the black clothing added tension to the film. Some liked the different locations and some thought that we should of stayed a bit longer in the woods, but we felt like we wanted to us different locations to show the audience the different location and that it could be effective.

Camera shots
Some people felt like the train shot was effective and that it creates tension when the antagonist disappears we wanted to put this shot in so that we make the audience feel the tension by making the antagonist disappear will make it more effective and people will think whats going to happen next?. Some said that fast pace camera movement was effective as it made it more dramatic especially in the attack. Finally people thought that the close up was good especially of the knife and the slit throat as we wanted to show the detail of the danger and the attack that was occurring which shows the key aspects of the opening
Editing 
There wasn't much feedback on the editing side but one person said that the jump cuts should of been quicker as it felt a bit slow, but we felt that we didn't want them that quick as we felt it will look messy and look awkward so we felt putting a slower jump cut made it more effective.